Thursday, May 1, 2008
THE MAGICAL CHEESE 4
Back at their base camp the cheese were hungry for battle and had trouble sleeping because of their bloodlust.Back at the salami camp their leader was enraged."YOU FOOLS how could u be loosing to these impudent pieces of cheese.""But commander there the greatest warriors of this world.""We shall see about that."A stunned silence fell over the army ,they knew what was coming and werent sure if they liked it.Dawn came again and the salami brought the slamiosaur and hoped it could tear through the cheese's ranks but there hopes were thrashed as Private Goat Cheese took his spear and hefted it into the air and it drove straight through the monsters forhead and it fell dead only inches from his feet the salami's hopes were crashed for that day and they retreated but what the cheese didnt know was they had a surprise coming.....To Be Continued
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I liked your entry because it was funny. I thought it was funny how the cheese and salami are fighting. My favorite part was when the salami brought in the salamiosaur. I hope that the cheese wins the battle. keep up the good writing. lol.
HOLY CRAP.
thats pretty intense.
i like this story because you have an insane imagination.
i cantwait to see what happens next.
good luck writing.
- miranda
i love this story. i love it because it makes me tingle. i love this so much. it needs mre cheese. peace out!!
i love this story. i love it because it makes me tingle. i love this so much. it needs mre cheese. peace out!!
that was funny. this had good detail. i hope the salami win in the end.i cant wait to see the next version.
Woww. haha
that as some funny stuff. the battle and everything i like how the slamiosaur got owed. whats the suprse i really wanna know now.! have fun writing about cheese and salami! :)
Wow. This entry is deffinatly origonal. You used a lot of imagination. I liked it because no one ive ever know has wrote about goats and cheese. Umm keep up the origonality!
I liked this post because your keep on writing about a on going story about cheese. You should take all your story's about cheese and put them into a book. called "MAGIC CHEESE". My favorite part was, when, the commander said "YOU FOOLS".
PS: THE MAGICAL CHEESE 5 should include "milk".
Wow! Very Intense. you have a great imgagination. Good job. keep writing.
Whoa. That's hardcore. You have the craziest imagineation I've ever seen! I like this because it was VERY creative and every thing is so origanal! Good job, and keep up the fairytales! Haha, just kidding. Good job! :)
hi Avery. I happen to know that you're a Naruto fan, so I'm giving you the link to this really great Naruto video on youtube. It'll freak you out, but you've got to be open to other peoples ideas. And watch the whole thing, don't just freak out and exit ASAP. Here's the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oERqPs4_S-U
Enjoy!!! ^^
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